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Post by Nucky on Sun May 27, 2012 10:23 pm

Saw this on another forum. This is simpler than the Renga thread and is more freeform. The only rules are contribute one line at a time and don't make two consecutive posts. Other than that, it can be as freeform as you wish. I'll start.

As I greeted the new day and ventured outside

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Post by Alethia on Mon May 28, 2012 1:23 am

a gentle breeze touched my face
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Post by unicorn13 on Mon May 28, 2012 6:43 am

the suns rays nourished me with their warm embrace
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Post by tezorian on Mon May 28, 2012 9:56 am

7 birds flew up to welcome this new day

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Post by Reamsie on Mon May 28, 2012 10:02 am

then gently landed and began to serenade me with their song

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Post by BlueTopaz on Mon May 28, 2012 2:03 pm

7 melodies entwined to make one single canticle.

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Post by jasmine on Mon May 28, 2012 4:24 pm

i closed my eyes, entranced
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Post by melodiccolor on Mon May 28, 2012 4:35 pm

drifting away on the trilled notes sang

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Post by Nucky on Tue May 29, 2012 3:40 am

Up to a place where serenity reigned

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Post by Alethia on Tue May 29, 2012 3:45 am

I floated on a cloud of nothingness
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Post by melodiccolor on Tue May 29, 2012 2:01 pm

while musical notes drifted surrounding

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Post by Clueless on Tue Jun 05, 2012 4:44 pm

An apperition of the fallen Madonna with the big boobbies by van Kumft
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Post by melodiccolor on Tue Jun 05, 2012 7:40 pm

wandered through the middle

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Post by Nucky on Tue Jun 05, 2012 8:22 pm

taking lustful glances at me

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Post by Clueless on Tue Jun 05, 2012 8:24 pm

while soothingly playing the fiddle
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Post by melodiccolor on Tue Jun 05, 2012 8:34 pm

and grinning laviously

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Post by Clueless on Tue Jun 05, 2012 11:49 pm

As her Boobies whispered True Love
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Post by Clueless on Thu Jun 07, 2012 1:06 am

as he was so short they whispered from above
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Post by Alethia on Thu Jun 07, 2012 2:45 am

and heavenly snowflakes landed on his balding head
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Post by mtngrl123 on Thu Jun 07, 2012 8:00 am

the bitter cold of the snow burned him

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Post by Alethia on Thu Jun 07, 2012 8:31 am

and his heart ignited in flames
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Post by Clueless on Thu Jun 07, 2012 3:12 pm

A burnt offering to the boobies above
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Post by melodiccolor on Thu Jun 07, 2012 4:03 pm

which then sprouted wings and flew

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Post by Clueless on Thu Jun 07, 2012 4:40 pm

In ever decreasing circles
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Post by Alethia on Thu Jun 07, 2012 5:23 pm

he moved his hands in time..
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Post by melodiccolor on Thu Jun 07, 2012 7:15 pm

and caught the flying birds

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Post by Alethia on Thu Jun 07, 2012 7:50 pm

nested them into a cosy cocoon
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Post by melodiccolor on Thu Jun 07, 2012 10:39 pm

where they then made holes for wings to spread

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Post by Alethia on Thu Jun 07, 2012 11:14 pm

and fed each day on tasty morsels
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Post by Nucky on Thu Jun 07, 2012 11:15 pm

given lovingly from above

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