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Post by Nucky on Mon Jan 30, 2012 4:15 am

Got this idea from another forum.

We'll start with this sentence:

I walked to the park and rested on a wooden bench, where I eagerly read my new book.

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Post by anarkandi on Mon Jan 30, 2012 5:13 am


We walked to the park and rested on a wooden bench, where I eagerly read my new book.
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Post by BlueTopaz on Mon Jan 30, 2012 11:18 am

We walked to the park and rested on a wooden bench, where I eagerly tossed my new book.

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Post by tezorian on Mon Jan 30, 2012 3:57 pm

We walked to the park and stood on a wooden bench, where I eagerly tossed my new book.

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Post by melodiccolor on Mon Jan 30, 2012 5:10 pm

We walked to the park and stood on a wooden bench, where I eagerly devoured my new book.

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Post by tezorian on Mon Jan 30, 2012 6:15 pm

We walked to the park and stood on a wooden bench, where I eagerly watched my new book.

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Post by anarkandi on Mon Jan 30, 2012 6:47 pm


We walked to the park and stood on a wooden bench, where I eagerly watched my new vegetable.
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Post by tezorian on Mon Jan 30, 2012 7:16 pm

Slowly walked to the park and stood on a wooden bench, where I eagerly watched my new vegetable

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Post by anarkandi on Mon Jan 30, 2012 7:21 pm

Slowly walked to the park and stood on a nihilistic bench, where I eagerly watched my new vegetable
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Post by Alethia on Mon Jan 30, 2012 7:55 pm

Slowly walked to the park and stood on a nihilistic bench, where I eagerly watched my new emptiness
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Post by Nucky on Mon Jan 30, 2012 8:34 pm

Slowly walked to the park and stood on a nihilistic bench, where I eagerly spread my new emptiness

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Post by melodiccolor on Mon Jan 30, 2012 8:39 pm

Slowly walked to the wasteland and stood on a nihilistic bench, where I eagerly watched my new emptiness

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Post by Nucky on Mon Jan 30, 2012 8:40 pm

Slowly walked to the wasteland and stood on a nihilistic bench, where Satan eagerly spread my new emptiness.

(I think we double-posted there Mel, you didn't include my change of the word "watched" to "spread" in my post right before yours. No biggie.)

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Post by tezorian on Mon Jan 30, 2012 10:25 pm

Slowly walked to the wasteland and stood on a nihilistic bench, where light eagerly spread my new emptiness.

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Post by melodiccolor on Mon Jan 30, 2012 11:01 pm

Slowly walked to the wasteland and stood on a nihilistic beach, where light eagerly spread my new emptiness..
(yep there was a cross post.)


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Post by mtngrl123 on Mon Jan 30, 2012 11:20 pm

Slowly walked to the wasteland and stood on a nihilistic beach, where light eagerly erased my new emptiness

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Post by melodiccolor on Mon Jan 30, 2012 11:30 pm

Slowly walked to the wasteland and stood on a moonlit beach, where light eagerly erased my new emptiness.

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Post by Nucky on Tue Jan 31, 2012 1:10 am

MJ walked to the wasteland and stood on a moonlit beach, where light eagerly erased my new emptiness.

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Post by Alethia on Tue Jan 31, 2012 2:00 am

Alethia walked to the wasteland and stood on a moonlit beach, where light eaglerly erased my new emptiness...
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Post by Nucky on Tue Jan 31, 2012 2:09 am

Alethia walked to the wasteland and stripped on a moonlit beach, where light eagerly erased my new emptiness...

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Post by Alethia on Tue Jan 31, 2012 2:14 am

Alethia walked to the wasteland and screamed on a moonlit beach, where light eagerly erased my new emptiness
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Post by melodiccolor on Tue Jan 31, 2012 2:27 am

Alethia walked to the wasteland and screamed on a moonlit beach, where light eagerly erased her new emptiness

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Post by Alethia on Tue Jan 31, 2012 3:44 am

Alethia walked to the ocean and screamed on a moonlit beach,where light eagerly erased her new energies...
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Post by melodiccolor on Tue Jan 31, 2012 4:37 am

Alethia walked to the ocean and screamed on a moonlit beach,where light eagerly embraced her new energies....

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Post by anarkandi on Tue Jan 31, 2012 5:11 am

Alethia walked to the ocean and screamed on a moonlit beach, where dr pepper eagerly embraced her new energies....
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Post by Alethia on Tue Jan 31, 2012 5:57 am

Alethia walked to the ocean and lay on a moonlit beach, where dr pepper eagerly embraced her new energies...(how do get my self out of this... Surprised )
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Post by Nucky on Tue Jan 31, 2012 6:00 am

Alethia walked to the ocean and lay on a moonlit beach, where dr pepper furiously embraced her new energies

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Post by anarkandi on Tue Jan 31, 2012 6:24 am

Melodies walked to the ocean and lay on a moonlit beach, where dr pepper furiously embraced her new energies
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Post by Alethia on Tue Jan 31, 2012 6:32 am

Melodies walked to the ocean and lay on a moonlit beach, where dr pepper channelled her new energies.
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Post by melodiccolor on Tue Jan 31, 2012 5:17 pm

She walked to the ocean and lay on a moonlit beach, where dr pepper channelled her new energies.

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